I feel like I'm in hell
Everything seems like death even when I close my eyes
It feels like a sharp piece of glass in my eyes
I've been waiting forever, the hours drag in this frozen earth
My thoughts are of my wife and children, I fear the worst
Has my journey come to an end?
Where is my guide?
I'm losing hope - and fear I'm losing my sight
I drift into a silent sleep, the end is close at hand
I hear voices close to me but soon they fade - was I dreaming?
I am alive though numb from head to foot and from somewhere deep within
I find the strength to make my way slowly down the mountain to camp.
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Terrific poem Liam -you have really captured what it must feel like to be alone, afraid and even dying on a mountain by yourself.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great piece of writing Liam. It gave me the chills to read because I could feel the cold and the despair. from Miss McQ
ReplyDeleteBrilliant poem Liam,it was a very descriptive interpretation of solitude,strength and courage. Well done
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